Psalms:
Bk 1: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41
Bk 2: 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72
Bk 3: 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89
Bk 4: 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106
Bk 5: 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119a 119b 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132
133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150
Additional Psalms: 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 Samuel Chronicles
69:1 LA MENATSE'ACH AL SHOSHANIM LE DAVID
KJ (King James translation): (To the chief Musician upon Shoshannim, A Psalm of David.) Save me, O God; for the waters are come in unto my soul.
LA MENATSEACH: For who was the MENATSE'ACH, see my note at Psalm 51:1.
AL SHOSHANIM: See my notes on both AL and SHOSHANIM at Psalm 45. They might just be white lilies of the valley, in a bouquet for the soprano, though nothing in Yehudit scripture is ever "just" anything.
LE DAVID: Why has it taken me 69 Psalms, and this my third go-round, before the thought has occurred to me: surely this should be translated as "For the Beloved".
69:2 HOSHIYENI ELOHIM KI VA'U MAYIM AD NEPHESH
KJ (69:1): as above
BN: Save me, Elohim; for the waters are come in even unto the soul.
Waters coming in even unto the knees I can understand, but "to the soul" can only be metaphorical ("the aqua-jet is poetry"?). Generally, in these mythological tales of the Earth-god and the sun-god and the moon-goddess and the deities of the other stars and planets, the waters are the ones that break in order for Creation to become possible (see Genesis 1 or ask your obstetrician). We should expect allusion to floods and sea-monsters.
69:3 TAVA'TI BIYVEN METSULAH VE EYN MA'AMAD BA'TI VE MA'AMAKEY MAYIM VE SHIBOLET SHETAPHATNI
KJ (69:2): I sink in deep mire, where there is no standing: I am come into deep waters, where the floods overflow me.
No, I think he really does mean the knees!
TAVA'TI...BA'TI: Internal rhymes, but in such a way it makes an alexandrine and a hiatus.
SHIBOLET: Should that not be pronounced Sibolet? See my notes at Judges 12:6.
KJ (69:3): I am weary of my crying: my throat is dried: mine eyes fail while I wait for my God.
I like this, a Psalm about being sick to death of being sick to death. I wonder if the irony was intentional.
MEYACHEL: or ME YACHEL? And don't you just love the complaint? The deity as a personal servant, for whom you ring, and get angry when he doesn't come up from the scullery immediately.
ELOHAI: is plural, ELOHIM SHEL LI in full.
69:5 RABU MI SA'AROT RO'SHI SON'AI CHINAM ATSMU MATSMIYTAI OYEVAI SHEKER ASHER LO GAZALTI AZ ASHIV
KJ (69:4): They that hate me without a cause are more than the hairs of mine head: they that would destroy me, being mine enemies wrongfully, are mighty: then I restored that which I took not away.
69:6 ELOHIM ATAH YADA'TA LE IVALTI VE ASHMOTAI MIMCHA LO NICH'CHADU
KJ (69:5): O God, thou knowest my foolishness; and my sins are not hid from thee.
Why "LE" IVALTI? Is LADA'AT (in this usage) a transitive verb, like those French verbs that require à or de?
69:7 AL YEVOSHU VI KOVEYCHA ADONAI YHVH TSEVA'OT AL YIKALMU VI MEVAKSHEYCHA ELOHEY YISRA-EL
KJ (69:6): Let not them that wait on thee, O Lord GOD of hosts, be ashamed for my sake: let not those that seek thee be confounded for my sake, O God of Israel.
BN: Do not let those who wait for you be ashamed because of me, my Lord YHVH, the Lord of the Hosts of the Heavens; {N} do not let those who seek you be brought to confusion on my account, O gods of Yisra-El.
This constant naming of different deities confirms over and over that First Temple Judaism was still polytheistic, and we can state with confidence that one of the Redactor's jobs (he was very unsuccessful) was to rewrite the texts in such a manner that monotheism, if not yet the Omnideity, was endorsed and embedded.
69:8 KI ALEYCHA NASA'TI CHERPAH KISTAH CHELIMAH PHANAI
Should that be a comma, or a semi-colon, after "reproach"; because it changes the meaning of the verse entirely, by changing the meaning of the word "because" entirely.
69:9 MUZAR HAYITI LE ECHAI VE NACHRI LIVNEY IMI
69:10 KI KIN'AT BEIT'CHA ACHALATNI VE CHERPOT CHORPHEYCHA NAPHLU ALAI
KJ (69:9): For the zeal of thine house hath eaten me up; and the reproaches of them that reproached thee are fallen upon me.
BN: Because zeal for your house has eaten me up, and the reproaches of those who reproach you have fallen upon me.
69:11 VA EVKEH VA TSOM NAPHSHI VA TEHI LA CHARAPHOT LI
KJ (69:10): When I wept, and chastened my soul with fasting, that was to my reproach.
Am I hearing in this an early hint of the Major Prophets, chastising for the insincerity, the treadmill nature, of prayer, penitence, sacrifice? Or is this the Psalmist thinking back to the Psalm that carried that same message, and bemoaning the inner contradiction? Cf 1 Samuel 15:22,
69:12 VA ETNAH LEVUSHI SAK VA EHI LAHEM LE MASHAL
KJ (69:11): I made sackcloth also my garment; and I became a proverb to them.
BN: I turned my clothing into sackcloth, and I became a byword to them.
MASHAL: is the word used for "proverb" in the book of that name.
69:13 YASIYCHU VI YOSHVEY SHA'AR U NEGIYNOT SHOTEY SHECHAR
KJ (69:12): They that sit in the gate speak against me; and I was the song of the drunkards.
BN: Those who sit in the gate chatter about me; and I am the song of the drunkards.
NEGIYNOT: Precisely the same is true of this word, which has occurred in various forms, and we have been uncertain whether it was an indication of the melody, the instruments used to accompany the song, the song itself, or a specific type of song.
69:14 VA ANI TEPHILATI LECHA YHVH ET RATSON ELOHIM BE RAV CHASDECHA ANEYNI BE EMET YISH'ECHA
And repeat the last two words, at least in the modern Conservative liturgy; it is now a key verse in Mah Tovu, the prayer that opens Shacharit every morning; and see my note about this hymn at Psalm 5:8: With the exception of the title, which comes from Bil'am's oracle in Numbers 24:5, the other verses that constitute "Mah Tovu" are all from Psalms: 26:8, this one, and 95:6, the latter modified from its original plural to the singular in the modern prayer. In Sephardi communities - the communities of Jews from Spain and North Africa – "Mah Tovu" is not sung, but Psalm 5:8 is recited on entering the synagogue, and Psalm 5:9 on leaving it.
69:15 HATSIYLENI MI TIYT VE AL ETBA'AH INATSLAH MI SON'AI U MI MA'AMAKEY MAYIM
KJ (69:14): Deliver me out of the mire, and let me not sink: let me be delivered from them that hate me, and out of the deep waters.
BN: Deliver me out of the mire, and let me not sink; let me be delivered from those who hate me, and out of the deep waters.
No, he definitely means those waters literally (see verse 3).
69:16 AL TISHTEPHENI SHIBOLET MAYIM VE AL TIVLA'ENI METSULAH VE AL TE'TAR ALAI BE'ER PIYHA
KJ (69:15): Let not the waterflood overflow me, neither let the deep swallow me up, and let not the pit shut her mouth upon me.
BN: Do not allow the flooding water to overwhelm me, nor let the deep swallow me up; {N} and do not alow the well to shut her mouth against me.
Second use of this; see Judges 12, and verse 3 above.
BE'ER: Not a BOR, nor any of the other several words used for pits and other entry-points to the Netherworld; this is quite specifically a Be'er, which is a well or fountain from which water may be gathered, as in Be'er Sheva or Be'er Lechi Ro'i; literal and geographical, not metaphorical, though obviously it connotes metaphorically as well. The point being, as per verse 4, that his throat is parched.
69:17 ANENI YHVH KI TOV CHASDECHA KE ROV RACHAMEYCHA PENEH ELAI
BN: Answer me, YHVH, for your mercy is good; according to the multitude of your compassions turn to me.
ANENI: "Hear me" is simply incorrect. He knows he has been heard. What he needs is a response.
69:18 VE AL TASTER PANEYCHA ME AVDECHA KI TSAR LI MAHER ANENI
KJ (69:17): And hide not thy face from thy servant; for I am in trouble: hear me speedily.
BN: And do not hide your face from your servant, for I am in distress; answer me speedily.
69:19 KARVAH EL NAPHSHI GE'ALAH LEMA'AN OYEVAI PEDENI
KJ (69:18): Draw nigh unto my soul, and redeem it: deliver me because of mine enemies.
BN: Draw nigh unto my soul, and redeem it; ransom me because of my enemies.
The first four words of this verse are quoted in the fourth verse of the song that introduces Kabbalat Shabbat on a Friday evening, Lecha Dodi - the word Dodi itself coming, of course, from the same root that gives the name David.
69:20 ATAH YAD'ATA CHERPATI U VASHTI U CHELIMATI NEGDECHA KOL TSORERAI
KJ (69:19): Thou hast known my reproach, and my shame, and my dishonour: mine adversaries are all before thee.
BN: You know my reproach, and my shame, and my confusion; my troubles are all before you.
No, again KJ is failing to translate the words in the text. There are no enemies here - those are the OYEVAI of verses 5 and 19: the troublemakers. These are the troubles themselves, the ones they have caused: TSURES in Yiddish.
69:21 CHERPAH SHAVRAH LIBI VA ANUSHAH VA AKAVEH LANUD VA AYIN VE LA MENACHAMIM VE LO MATSA'TI
KJ (69:20): Reproach hath broken my heart; and I am full of heaviness: and I looked for some to take pity, but there was none; and for comforters, but I found none.
69:22 VA YITNU BE VARUTI ROSH VE LITSMA'I YASHKUNI CHOMETS
KJ (69:21): They gave me also gall for my meat; and in my thirst they gave me vinegar to drink.
ROSH: The head, as in the top of the body, but also the starting-point of the river, and indeed the "Big Bang" of Creation itself - BERE'SHIT. So how does it come to mean poison? And why is it that the answer to that question takes us back yet again to Deuteronomy 32, which was so dominant a source (source, as in ROSH) for the last Psalm. Verses 32 and 33 when you get there, though Hosea 10:4 also has it, and several others, including Deuteronomy 29:17... none of which explain it, but at least they confirm that this is one of the usages.
And having gone through each of those complexly ambivalent terms, is this verse really about people trying to poison him? I leave that to you to unravel.
69:23 YEHI SHULCHANAM LIPHNEYHEM LE PHACH VE LISHLOMIM LE MOKESH
KJ (69:22): Let their table become a snare before them: and that which should have been for their welfare, let it become a trap.
BN: Let their table become a snare before them; and when they they think that life has become a state of peace and harmony, let that become a trap as well.
69:24 TECHSHACHNAH EYNEYHEM ME RE'OT U MATNEYHEM TAMID HAM'AD
KJ (69:23): Let their eyes be darkened, that they see not; and make their loins continually to shake.
BN: Let their eyes be darkened, that they see not; and make their loins continually shake.
TECHSHACHNAH: The root is CHOSECH, "dakness"; the prefictual Tav places it in the second person singular, but using that as a vocative; and PI'EL not PA'AL.
MATNEYHEM: Or maybe it isn't their loins anyway. That would usually be MATNAYIM, using a multiple plural, and generally it means the entire lower back and front - probably the equivalent to the phrase "private parts" in English (2 Kings 4:29, 9:1, Isaiah 20:2...). And so, yes, it could be "loins", but the root is MATAN, which means "a gift", and becomes the "private parts" because these are the "special gifts" without which life cannot be created, or its residue removed. But there are other "special gifts" - the ones brought as sacrifices, for example, to remove the residue of wicked thought and violent action, the means of dumping the excrement of sin in the PACH ASHPAH which is the gutter that surrounds the altar (Ezekiel 43:13/14).
69:25 SHEPHACH ALEYHEM ZA'MECHA VA CHARON APCHA YASIYGEM
KJ (69:24): Pour out thine indignation upon them, and let thy wrathful anger take hold of them.
It also clashes profoundly with Midrashic responses to such incidents as the miracle of the Red Sea (see my notes to Exodus 15, especially verse 19), where what is a miracle to one side is also a terrible tragedy to the other, and both attributable to the deity.
69:26 TEHI TIYRATAM NESHAMAH BE AHALEYHEM AL YEHI YOSHEV
KJ (69:25): Let their habitation be desolate; and let none dwell in their tents.
BN: Let their encampment be desolate; let none dwell in their tents.
I need to look this one up, but it seems that the desolate habitations is one of the major prophecies of one of the major prophets - and directed in his case against Yisra-El. (And yes, I know that it is quoted in Acts 1:20, but that isn't the one my synapses are having trouble locating).
KJ (69: 26): For they persecute him whom thou hast smitten; and they talk to the grief of those whom thou hast wounded.
BN: For they persecute he who you have smitten; and they tell of the pain of those who you have wounded.
KI ATAH: Very strange syntax here. Literally, word-by-word, "Because you who you struck they pursue and to sorrows your wounds they will tell". Make sense of that if you can!
CHALALEYCHA: Pure coincidence I am sure, but the poet's ear cannot help but hear this. CHAS VE CHALILAH ("the god's forbid") that I am correct, but soften the Chet into a Hey (and visually they are easily mistaken), and the space between those wounds (חֲלָלֶיךָ) and the praises (Hallelu-Yah) for the deity that caused them (הללויה) is very small indeed (see verse 31 below).
69:28 TENAH AVON AL AVONAM VE AL YAVO'U BE TSIDKATECHA
KJ (69:27): Add iniquity unto their iniquity: and let them not come into thy righteousness.
BN: Add iniquity to their iniquity; and do not grant them access to your justice.
There is some serious anger being vented in this Psalm, an extraordinary contrast with the petitioning for mercy and compassion elsewhere.
69:29 YIMACHU MI SEPHER CHAYIM VE IM TSADIYKIM AL YIKATEVU
KJ (69:28): Let them be blotted out of the book of the living, and not be written with the righteous.
BN: Let them be blotted out of the book of the living, and not be written with the righteous.
Yom Kippur language; though we can also see where Rabban Gamli-El took his source of inspiration for that vile blessing in the Amidah, Ve La Malshinim.
69:30 VA ANI ANI VE CHO'EV YESHU'AT'CHA ELOHIM TESAGVENI
BN: But I am afflicted and in pain; let your salvation, Elohim, set me up on high.
ANI ANI: One with an Ayin, one with an Aleph.
But there is also a point at which "woe is me" becomes tiresome, self-pitying, self-indulgent, and actually deeply hypocritical - and I think this verse is the point at which this Psalm achieves it (those who agree with me should see "Aye-Eye"). And why? Why such a Psalm anyway?
69:31 AHALELAH SHEM ELOHIM BE SHIR VE AGADLENU VE TODAH
KJ (69:30): I will praise the name of God with a song, and will magnify him with thanksgiving.
BN: I will praise the name of Elohim with a song, and exalt him with this thanksgiving.
69:32 VE TIYTAV L'YHVH MI SHOR PAR MAKRIN MAPHRIS
KJ (69:31): This also shall please the LORD better than an ox or bullock that hath horns and hoofs.
VE TIYTAV: Picking up once again the insistence that the gods do not want the sacrifices, but rather the obedience, the righteous behaviour.
YHVH: Where most of the Psalms in this part of the collection focus on Elohim and virtually ignore YHVH, this one has already mentioned YHVH several times, once as YHVH Tseva'ot. But those were merely mentions; here he becomes the focus, and it is precisely when the Psalm is changing mood, from whining about enemies and wishing ill on them, to praise for the wonders of the world, and the beginning of the shift from sacrifices (Sadducean Temple) to obedience (Pharisaic Talmud). So YHVH supercedes Elohim, and the other named deities, but is still part of the polytheon (confirmed by verse 36); so we can date this part of the text as a deliberate rewriting of a much older text, rather than the creation of a new text; a re-creation for the restored Temple, rather than an original creation for the Solomonic First Temple, which was entirely polytheistic. Probably early in the Hasmonean epoch (by its middle YHVH has staged his coup and elected himself autocratic President for eternity).
MAKRIN MAPHRIS: Are those horns and hoofs among the origins of the later portrait of ha-Satan, the transformed Christian version, the one that also has a very Jewish nose?
69:33 RA'U ANAVIM YISMACHU DORSHEY ELOHIM VIYCHI LEVAVECHEM
KJ (69:32): The humble shall see this, and be glad: and your heart shall live that seek God.
BN: The humble shall see it, and be glad; you who seek after the gods, let your heart revive.
69:34 KI SHOME'A EL EVYONIM YHVH VE ET ASIYRAV LO VAZAH
KJ (69:33): For the LORD heareth the poor, and despiseth not his prisoners.
EL: And YHVH may have risen to the rank of Chief Executive, but El is still the Chairman of the Board.
KJ (69:34): Let the heaven and earth praise him, the seas, and every thing that moveth therein.
BN: Let the heavens and the Earth, the seas, and everything that moves therein and thereon praise him.
KJ (69:35): For God will save Zion, and will build the cities of Judah: that they may dwell there, and have it in possession.
BN: For the gods will save Tsi'on, and build the cities of Yehudah; and they shall abide there, and keep it as their possession.
YOSHI'A TSI'ON: Why is not ET TSI'ON?
YIVNEY AREY YEHUDAH: Can only be said after the return from exile, any time after 536 BCE. In Shelomoh's time, at the First Temple, it would have been meaningless to say this - Yeru-Shala'im was in the tribal territory of Bin-Yamin, so why pick out Yehudah and not mention all the other tribes as well? and anyway the land was Yisra-El; it only became Yehudah after the civil war following Shelomoh's death; but the liturgy of the First Temple, insofar as we know, refused to accept that the political division was also a religious division, and anyway there was nothing that required building in Yehudah until the destruction of 586 BCE.
69:37 VE ZERA AVADAV YINCHALUHA VE OHAVEY SHEMO YISHKENU VAH
KJ (69:36): The seed also of his servants shall inherit it: and they that love his name shall dwell therein.
Not for the first time 36 verses (37 with the title) - is there any significance? Thirty-six in Yehudit-Ivrit is Lamed-Vav (ל"ו), and that number is not only the number of King David's bodyguard (it takes 6x6 swords to make the Magen David, the Shield or Star of David), but in Talmudic Judaism the bodyguard of the human race itself. Click here.
Psalms:
Bk 1: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41
Bk 2: 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72
Bk 3: 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89
Bk 4: 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106
Bk 5: 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119a 119b 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132
133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150
Additional Psalms: 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 Samuel Chronicles
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