Psalms:
Bk 1: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41
Bk 2: 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72
Bk 3: 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89
Bk 4: 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106
Bk 5: 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119a 119b 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132
133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150
Additional Psalms: 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 Samuel Chronicles
90:1 TEPHILAH LE MOSHEH ISH HA ELOHIM ADONAI MA'ON ATAH HAYITA LANU BE DOR VA DOR
KJ (King James translation): (A Prayer of Moses the man of God.) Lord, thou hast been our dwelling place in all generations.
Is the belief that this was actually written by Mosheh, in Yehudit, or is that merely a literary conceit? Does it have an echo in Torah? Would Mosheh have regarded himself as an ISH HA ELOHIM, or as a follower of EL (see verse 2), rather than an ISH YHVH? What we can take as a certainty is that the Mosheh of the four books of Torah in which he appears had no knowledge whatsoever of the language that we now call Ivrit, which the authors of the Bible called Yehudit - brought up, according to those books, as a prince in the palace of the Pharaoh, he would have spoken Mitsri (Egyptian) as a young man, a language entirely different from the common Amorite-Hittite languages of Kena'an and the lands to the east. The Habiru whom he led out of "bondage" may have spoken an ancient form of that language, though the evidence of Africans taken to the New World as slaves (and their period of slavery was slightly shorter than that of the Beney Yisra-El in Egypt), was that deracination stripped them of their language, their culture, their religion, within two generations, leaving a residue of folk-lore that was little more than dance and melodies, alongside some of the more obscure cultic practices retained in secret among the priesthood, of which the Voodoo cults of Haiti are the best known. The disappearance (usually by suppression) of Celtic culture and language in Britain under the Anglo-Saxons and Normans tells the same story, as do countless other examples around the world.
KJ: Before the mountains were brought forth, or ever thou hadst formed the earth and the world, even from everlasting to everlasting, thou art God.
BN: Before the mountains were established, even before you formed the Earth and the Cosmos, {N} from infinity to infinity, you are El.
EL: Would Mosheh have referred to the deity as EL?
TEVEL: Interesting concepts, Cosmos and infinity. They are obviously anachronisms in my translation, but yet; cf Job 37:12, Proverbs 8:31, Isaiah 14:17... ... and I wonder if this doesn't give us the source of both Tuval and Yaval... ancient Titans connected with Creation.
ME OLAM AD OLAM: Mirroring BE DOR VA DOR in the previous verse.
KJ: Thou turnest man to destruction; and sayest, Return, ye children of men.
BN: You reduce Humankind to tiny pieces, and say: Return, you sons of Adam.
ENOSH...VENEY ADAM: Unusual to see these two ways of describing Humankind in the same sentence. See my previous notes as well as the links here.
DAK'A: DACH means "crushed", which spiritually may lead to "contrition", which is how several translators render it here; but this is a continuation of the complaint in the last Psalm: you make us old, and sick, and send all manner of TSURES to afflict our lives, and then you expect us to say thank you and get on with it...
90:4 KI ELEPH SHANIM BE EYNEYCHA KE YOM ETMOL KI YA'AVOR VE ASHMURAH VA LAILAH
KJ: For a thousand years in thy sight are but as yesterday when it is past, and as a watch in the night.
BN: For a thousand years in your eyes are just the day before yesterday when it has passed, {N} a mere watchman in the night.
If this is to be credible as something written by Mosheh himself, there needs to be something in the choice of vocabulary, in the underpinning conceits and ideas, that we can identify with other literary pieces attributed to him: the Song at the Reed Sea for example (Exodus 15), or the great sermon at the end of Deuteronomy. Thus far I am unable to identify anything at all. Indeed, the opposite; everything seems philosophical to a point way beyond Mosheh's experience, education or intellect.
90:5 ZERAMTAM SHENAH YIHEYU BA BOKER KE CHATSIR YACHALOPH
KJ: Thou carriest them away as with a flood; they are as a sleep: in the morning they are like grass which groweth up.
BN: You pour them away like sleep; in the morning they are like faded grass.
Images of time passing, things coming to nothing.
90:6 BA BOKER YATSITS VE CHALAPH LA EREV YEMOLEL VE YAVESH
KJ: In the morning it flourisheth, and groweth up; in the evening it is cut down, and withereth.
BN: In the morning it flourishes, and grows; in the evening it is cut down, and dries out.
YAVESH: It can't wither if it has been cut down; it has to be on the stalk to wither. Once cut down it dries.
90:7 KI CHALIYNU VE APECHA U VA CHAMAT'CHA NIVHALNU
KJ: For we are consumed by thine anger, and by thy wrath are we troubled.
BN: For we are brought to an end by your anger, and left terrified by your wrath.
90:8 SHAT AVONOTEYNU LE NEGDECHA ALUMENU LIM'OR PANEYCHA
KJ: Thou hast set our iniquities before thee, our secret sins in the light of thy countenance.
BN: You have set our iniquities before you, our secret sins in the light of your countenance.
LIM'OR : Or LI ME'OR? Whereas this is a very metaphysical paradigm of sin, symptom of an epoch at least thousand years after Mosheh.
90:9 KI CHOL YAMEYNU PANU VE EVRATECHA KILIYNU SHANEYNU CHEMO HEGEH
KJ: For all our days are passed away in thy wrath: we spend our years as a tale that is told.
BN: For all our days are spent dealing with your wrath; we bring our years to an end as a tale with a miserable ending.
PANU: Word-playing with PANEYCHA in the previous verse.
90:10 YEMEY SHENOTEYNU VAHEM SHIV'IM SHANAH VE IM BIGVUROT SHEMONIM SHANAH VE RAHBAM AMAL VA AVEN KI GAZ CHIYSH VA NA'UPHAH
KJ: The days of our years are threescore years and ten; and if by reason of strength they be fourscore years, yet is their strength labour and sorrow; for it is soon cut off, and we fly away.
BN: The days of our years are threescore years and ten, or even by reason of strength fourscore years; {N} yet their only boast is hard work and suffering; {N} and then it's done, and off we fly.
VAHEM: How do we translate this?
SEVENTY/EIGHTY: I have a note about this somewhere else in the Tanach where it occurred; need to cross-reference that one with this one only I can't remember where it is. But isn't it interesting, when you actually read the text, to discover that some of the great clichés of the Bible are not actually correct! "Pride goeth before a fall..." Nope, not correct. "A virgin shall conceive..." Nope, not correct. "Maximum life expectancy is three score years and ten..." Nope, not correct. It is actually eighty.
RAHBAM: The root is RAHAV, whic can mean "pride", but is usually stronger than that: "boasting", or even "bullying" in Isaiah 3:5. Nor can we ignore that most proud and boastful of all deities - RAHAV in Egyptian, usually RACHAV, the Prince of the Sea, in the Yehudit texts.
NA'UPHAH: From the root "OV", pronounced "OFF", whence my dreadful pun.
90:11 MI YODE'A OZ APECHA U CHE YIR'AT'CHA EVRATECHA
KJ: Who knoweth the power of thine anger? even according to thy fear, so is thy wrath.
BN: Who knows the power of your anger? And your wrath is precisely relative to our fear of it.
U CHE YIR'AT'CHA EVRATECHA: Which is really a very modern psychological insight, or at the very least belongs to the metaphysical not the mythological epoch. The deity is angry with us for our sins; but the deity is a metaphor; so really it is the extent of our guilt that determines the anger of the deity. Freud and Rogers would have no problem with the paradigm.
90:12 LIMNOT YAMEYNU KEN HODA VE NAV'I LEVAV CHACHMAH
KJ: So teach us to number our days, that we may apply our hearts unto wisdom.
BN (literal translation): To number our days, so that we may know, and our hearts can be brought to wisdom...
KEN: Belongs with HODA, not with LIMNOT, but most translators move it to LIMNOT because there seems to be a need for another word there - and most translators add one or two, to resolve the problem. KEN is correctly translated as "that we may", so perhaps there should have been a second KEN. My sense is that the sentence is incomplete, and depends on the opening of the next verse to become grammatical.
90:13 SHUVAH YHVH AD MATAI VE HINACHEM AL AVADEYCHA
KJ: Return, O LORD, how long? and let it repent thee concerning thy servants.
BN: ...turn again, YHVH. Until when? And be comforted about your servants.
SHUVAH: Could be a physical turning, but usually the concept is spiritual. So a Ba'al Teshuvah is a person returning to religious observance after a period of lapse.
90:14 SAB'ENU VA BOKER CHASDECHA U NERANENAH VE NISMECHAH BE CHOL YAMEYNU
KJ: O satisfy us early with thy mercy; that we may rejoice and be glad all our days.
BN: Satisfy us with your lovingkindness in the morning, so that we may may spend the rest of the day dancing and rejoicing.
NERANANA VE NISMECHAH: Not used in liturgy, though it is used in synagogue; the distinction being the festival party after the service of worship. HAVA NAGILAH - click here to hear it (this version starts very slowly).
90:15 SAMCHENU KIYMOT INIYTANU SHENOT RA'IYNU RA'AH
KJ: Make us glad according to the days wherein thou hast afflicted us, and the years wherein we have seen evil.
BN: Make us glad in proportion to the days on which you have made us suffer, in proportion to the years in which we have witnessed evil.
90:16 YERA'EH EL AVADEYCHA PHA'ALECHA VA HADARCHA AL BENEYHEM
KJ: Let thy work appear unto thy servants, and thy glory unto their children.
BN: Let your work be made visible to your worshippers, and your glory to their children.
AVADEYCHA...PHA'ALECHA: I think this may be the only occasion in the Tanach when these two words, so similar yet so contradictory, are used in the same sentence.
HADAR: The word appears twice in Daniel 4 (verses 31 and 34), and is generally translated as "honour", though "honour" is the common translation of KAVOD (כָּבוֹד); ibid for Psalm 149:9. Elsewhere it means an ornament or decoration, some kind of jewelery (Psalm 45:4 and 96:6, Ezekiel 16:14 et al), whence its metaphorical usage as the "majesty" of the deity (Psalm 29:4 and 104:1, Job 40:10). But actually the root takes us back to the sacred number seven, because the real "glory" of the male deity, his true "majesty", lies in his machismo, his ability to fecundate the universe - and the root of HADAR means precisely that: tumescence, something that is large, swollen, hard, which of course (see Isaiah 45:2) is a description of his holy mountain, with its rocky summit (which takes us back in a neat circle to verse 2, and makes this Psalm, as the next verse will endorse, "complete").
90:17 VIYHI NO'AM ADONAI ELOHEYNU ALEYNU U MA'ASEH YADEYNU KONENAH ALEYNU U MA'ASEH YADEYNU KONENEHU
KJ: And let the beauty of the LORD our God be upon us: and establish thou the work of our hands upon us; yea, the work of our hands establish thou it.
BN: And let the pleasantness of my Lord Elohim be upon us; {N} Complete the work of our hands; yea, let the work of our hands be made complete. {P}
ELOHIM: Not YHVH; we are still with the polytheon.
The ending of this verse using repetition with slight variation to create a form of refrain; confirming that this would have been sung, even though, for the most part, it has come across as rather prosaic. Perhaps only the last part was sung.
KONENAH: And also making another kind of completion, with AVADEYCHA... PHA'ALECHA for the deity's handiwork in verse 16, and this complementing it for the human.
Psalms:
Bk 1: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41
Bk 2: 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72
Bk 3: 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89
Bk 4: 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106
Bk 5: 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119a 119b 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132
133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150
Additional Psalms: 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 Samuel Chronicles
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